托福寫作常出現(xiàn)的句子錯誤

關聯(lián)詞語重復

Since I want to go to a good school,there fore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在該句的主要主語和主要動詞前使用連詞。

句子不完整

Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to gets in to scollege.For example,my friend in high school.句子沒有主要主語或主要動詞，因為其實它應是一個從句。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。

結構不平行例

I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.當使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯(lián)接起來的時候，應當使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語。

不知所云例

Many companies began using computer smouth.

段落過長，不分段主語與動詞一致問題She are a good friend of mine that I has known for along time.主語和動詞在數(shù)方面不一致。

不 要使用get When I got home,I got tired,so I got a book and got sin to sbed.Get太不正式，意思也過于含糊，不適合用在正式的場合。應將get改為一個更加具體的單詞，如 become,receive,find,achieve,等等。

句子別扭

We heated the soupin the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辭過長或不清。換言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑。