托福寫(xiě)作常出現(xiàn)的句子錯(cuò)誤

關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)重復(fù)

Since I want to go to a good school,there fore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在該句的主要主語(yǔ)和主要?jiǎng)釉~前使用連詞。

句子不完整

Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to gets in to scollege.For example,my friend in high school.句子沒(méi)有主要主語(yǔ)或主要?jiǎng)釉~，因?yàn)槠鋵?shí)它應(yīng)是一個(gè)從句。這是一個(gè)非常常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤，修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來(lái)。

結(jié)構(gòu)不平行例

I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.當(dāng)使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯(lián)接起來(lái)的時(shí)候，應(yīng)當(dāng)使用詞性相同或同一類(lèi)型的短語(yǔ)。

不知所云例

Many companies began using computer smouth.

段落過(guò)長(zhǎng)，不分段主語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞一致問(wèn)題She are a good friend of mine that I has known for along time.主語(yǔ)和動(dòng)詞在數(shù)方面不一致。

不 要使用get When I got home,I got tired,so I got a book and got sin to sbed.Get太不正式，意思也過(guò)于含糊，不適合用在正式的場(chǎng)合。應(yīng)將get改為一個(gè)更加具體的單詞，如 become,receive,find,achieve,等等。

句子別扭

We heated the soupin the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辭過(guò)長(zhǎng)或不清。換言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑。