【美國留學】優(yōu)秀ESSAY范例：視野與榜樣

vision and example

視野與榜樣

prompt: describe your leadership style. what skills do you need to develop to become a more effective leader?

"i believe that two qualities in particular characterize my leadership style: the ability to establish a clear vision and the ability to set an example. establishing a clear vision up front allows me to convey a sense of purpose and responsibility to every member of my team. a clear vision also provides a roadmap for setting goals and developing action plans. as each action plan is implemented and each goal is accomplished, project milestones are reached and overall progress is observed. the impression of progress -- as well as evidence thereof -- is key to maintaining a motivated and productive team."

"once a clear vision has been established, i seek to set an example for my colleagues. specifically, i work to gain the respect of my team through action. people are more apt to mobilize after they have observed another person in action. when team members realize that i am willing to put in the effort, they feel compelled to act accordingly. in addition, they become more responsive to my leadership and more confident in their own work."

"in order to become a more effective leader, i need to improve my skills in both management and organization. the proper management of resources can make or break a project operating under a tight financial or personnel budget, while efficient organization promotes resource management. a leader who understands organizational philosophy will be a successful resource manager. since my primary role has traditionally been a resource rather than a manager of resources, i have had few opportunities to practice these skills. these skills will become a necessity as i step into positions of increasing managerial responsibility and organizational leadership."

文章思路：

兩個特質(zhì)——凸現(xiàn)自身領(lǐng)導力

兩個急需加強的特質(zhì)——表明自身潛力和準確定位

這個過程,是一個用實際行動檢驗自己觀點的過程,有了新的想法,就付之行動,然后從結(jié)果中去總結(jié)出新觀點,再指導行動！這也是領(lǐng)導人的特質(zhì)！

詳細分析：

關(guān)于視野：視野就是作者的一個定位,有了準確的定位,自然才能出來一個合理的計劃,再者嚴格按照計劃進行,自然能收到理想的效果。

關(guān)于榜樣：領(lǐng)導人需要有感染力,或者個人魅力,作者以身作則,開始帶頭實施計劃,通過自身努力得到大家的認可,帶動大家的積極性并相繼效仿,這就是領(lǐng)導特質(zhì)。

接 下來是大家非常認同這位管理者,同時給與他尊重與認可！在文章中作者沒有很多的去描述自己具有怎么樣的特質(zhì),而是通過描述事情的狀況來體現(xiàn)出來,給人身臨 其境的感覺,似乎看到了這樣一幅景象：一個管理者很有條理的完成一件事情,效果很好,然后周圍的人做類似的工作就總是先想一想他們的管理人是怎么做的,然 后就很自信地去效仿做起來,效果一樣很好！

結(jié)尾點評：

最后一段的總結(jié)既能看出作者對領(lǐng)導特質(zhì)的見地,也體現(xiàn)了他現(xiàn)在對自己的一個定位,自己處于什么位置,以后該怎么做,方向非常清晰,也很謙虛,很實際,給人聽了確實有理！所以文章被評為一篇優(yōu)秀essay確實是實至名歸！

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